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Wednesday, 30 August 2017

Five senses writing

Kia ora bloggers!
This week we had to do some individual writing. We had to choose a picture out of six pictures to write a story about. We had to include three senses to describe in my story.  I chose a winding pathway. Hope you enjoy reading it!
Ka kite ano. 🙂





The wind howled as I walked up the winding path.Old, creaky trees reaching out to me like spiked claws. I shuddered at the thought of huge spiders crawling up the trees. Old, musty smells hit me as I walked deeper into the pathway. The trees whispered to each other behind my back. Old dying grass littered the pathway like rubbish. Mist floated around like ghost’s. I winced as they passed through  me. It was like walking into cold water.


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